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"One dark night, in the middle of the day"........
" . . . two dead boys got up to fight . . ."

"One dark night, in the middle of the day"........
I believe you reversed it. It should be "One bright day in the middle of the night", which then rhymes with the next line...
no, no, no

"...two dead boys came out to play..."
Hmm . . . this could go several different ways.

 
"One dark night, in the middle of the day"........
" . . . two dead boys got up to fight . . ."

"One dark night, in the middle of the day"........
I believe you reversed it. It should be "One bright day in the middle of the night", which then rhymes with the next line...
no, no, no

"...two dead boys came out to play..."
Hmm . . . this could go several different ways.
"......back to back, they faced each other......"

 
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