CR4IGG3RS Posted October 10, 2010 Share Posted October 10, 2010 After second viewing... Get rid of that quick frame with the Sears trophy in it, it's distracting, uncoordinated, and looks like a*s. If you're intent of having a trohpy in the frame than either crop it out and set it on top of the video, or set it no either one of the corners or 1/3 of the video (vertical 3rds) and fade it over the video itself. get rid of the white background picture on top of a black default background just randomly flashing. the outro is good, like the fade from the music to commentary, but you don't let the commentry complete, you cut it off halfway as the announcer is about the tell the rest of the B12 what to watch out for, it's extremely anti-climactic. Finish the audio clip. Add in some fluff big red Ns or another clip if you need, but don't cut off the announcer in the middle of his audio if you have already commited to using the clip. Quote Link to comment
irieboy8 Posted October 10, 2010 Share Posted October 10, 2010 hell i thought it was great and got me fired up... i actually kinda liked the song... most of them i hear are either crappy played out rap or new metal type shiet.... i always appriciate the highlights however..... but yours was good... right on Quote Link to comment
CR4IGG3RS Posted October 10, 2010 Share Posted October 10, 2010 and I've used windows movie maker - it's not the best, but the basic tools are all there, it's just a matter of learning how to use them . Looks great so far, keep up the good work! Quote Link to comment
RedDenver Posted October 10, 2010 Share Posted October 10, 2010 I liked it! Only things I'd change are, as mentioned before, slow down the game footage in the grey intro and remove the quick clip of the trophy. Also, when the music switches to the fast tempo and harder sound, I'd put a big defensive hit in there timed to the first major beat. The play you have is exciting but it's slow-developing compared to the sudden audio change. Good luck! I got into making videos a few years ago and it's quite addictive once you get your first one finished. Quote Link to comment
kansas husker Posted October 10, 2010 Share Posted October 10, 2010 Great Job other the the things alrady mentioned about the music, it was an awesome video. While the song didn't do much the overall video did leave me pumped. Quote Link to comment
Moiraine Posted October 10, 2010 Author Share Posted October 10, 2010 made a couple changes Quote Link to comment
kansas husker Posted October 10, 2010 Share Posted October 10, 2010 +1 on the changes Quote Link to comment
Haspula Posted October 10, 2010 Share Posted October 10, 2010 Looks really great Quote Link to comment
NUance Posted October 10, 2010 Share Posted October 10, 2010 Excellent work! I like how you slow-mo-ed Dennard’s pick-6 hurdle over the Washington Husky at the 3:35 point. Great sound track too! Quote Link to comment
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